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The Roanoke Cop has just returned from an extended vacation and he has responded to the post Hunting for Drunks and other Roanoke Police Hijinks that I put up awhile back. It attracted a whole bunch of responses on this blog.
His post is titled DWI Explained.
A couple thing here. First, he notes that:
The stories I tell here are all true but my purpose is not technical accuracy like my reports or testimony. My purpose is to illustrate the nature of my job in an educational and entertaining way.
Based on that, I'll assume The Roanoke Cop employs dramatic techniques that many writers (including me) use to make their stuff more interesting. As far as this writer is concerned, that is wise.
It doesn't necessarily mean that we make anything up. But at least in my case, it means we leave a lot of things out. There are many, many, many mundane facts that get in the way of a good story (or news column space limitations) that can be left out with distorting the tale.
Second, I'll say this: In the course of a 25-year-long career in journalism, I have read more than 100,000 pages of police reports. All of those were in Maryland.
And based on those, I have no small amount of admiration for The Roanoke Cop as a writer. He's good and there is no question about it. He's a freaking Hemingway among cops, most of whom are really rotten writers. (And by the way, I don't know his name and I've never met the guy).
Third, the most interesting thing about his most recent post is that he added a detail that was not in the original post. It is this: the driver they pulled over who WAS driving under the influence had an unworking headlight.
Here's the relevant portion of the original post:
We spotted a car as it passed us going the other way. I could see the driver hunched forward, right on top of the steering wheel. "There goes our drunk," I tell the rookie, who's driving. He turns around on the car and we catch up and watch a bit.
The car keeps riding the dotted white lane lane. He comes off it and then weaves back onto the line. We have seen enough and light him up. He stopped in a parking lot. The rookie makes contact and decides to get the driver out and run him through field sobriety tests. He does a good job putting the driver through the tests. It's been 5 months since I taught the DWI class in the academy but my rookie has maintained a lot of the knowledge. I interject some help once in a while but he didn't really need me.
The driver keeps telling us, "You got me, I'm drunk, we don't need to do these tests." We did the tests anyway but that will be a good statement for court.
And here is something Roanoke Street Cop wrote in the more recent post:
The stop of the DWI we arrested clearly shows his headlight out as we passed going the other way before we turned around on him. The traffic stops were all recorded from start to finish, including the last one that resulted in the DWI arrest.
For whatever purpose, that seems like a key difference that goes a bit beyond the boundaries of dramatic license.
I would urge you to compare the entirety of the two posts to ascertain for yourself whether I am taking anything out of context here.
Now it is entirely possible that he left it out because he goofed when writing up the blog post. I would bet you that, as a reporter, I have left out key details like that more than 100 times, only to have my backstop (a metro editor or copy editor) call it to my attention with a "Yo, Dude, you left this out and it needs to go in."
Almost always they were correct. Because we bloggers most often self-edit, we lack that valuable filter. That is most likely the case here.
On one hand, I am still glad they nailed that (male) drunken driver. Because I have two sober teen-aged daughters driving on our streets and I would not want either of them, or anyone else, injured by somebody like the arrestee.
But it raises the question anew: whether or not they had the legal authority to pull people over, were they targeting people that night for the purpose of helping a rookie bag his first DUI?
And it adds another: why did The Roanoke Cop leave a key detail like the unworking headlight out of the first account?
UPDATE: The first comment to this post is from The Roanoke Cop himself.